just_asim Bronze Member
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| Subject: Main patnivrat pati ke rup amain prasidh hoon Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:00 pm | |
| Jab bhi koi nayi kavita banata hoon, khushi se atm-mugdh ho jata hoon Agar koi sun-ne wala nahi milta to pane aap ko sunata hoon Anekon patniyan pativrata hoti hai, main patnivrat pati ke rup amain prasidh hoon Ghar, kapde ki safayi se lekar, chulha chauka ke karyon mein bhi main sidh hoon Mere mitr aur parichit aksar mera majak udate hain Tarah-tarah ke bisheshano se bibhushit kar samay asamay mujhe chidhatae hain Bina kisi pratiwad ke main sab sun leta hoon Badle mein un nasamajhon ko, ek fiki muskaan bhar deta hoon Meri vivashta kuch khas hai Patni ko kaam ka bojh se, mukt karne ka chhota sa mera prayas hai Taki wo aaasani se meri kavita sun sake Kyonki mujhe adad ke shrota ki talaash hai Lagataar kavita sunte sunte, patni bhi ho gayi tang Palak jhapakte hi ek din usne dikhlaya apna rang Boli ! He-y kavirupdhari patidev main to aapki charno ki dashi hoon Saath janmo tak saath nivaon issi aas ki pyasi hoon Wada karti hoon aap jaissa kehenge waisa karoongi Sirf ek vinti hai pran-nath bhavishya main aapki kavita nahi sunoongi
Tut gayi sab meri asha, patni ne di ghor nirasha Raat ke baraah baje meri ek kavita puri hui Beraham samay ke karan priya shrotayon se duri hui Himmat karke jab khola gate Mila ek bhikari jo tha graduate Man hua ki arkemadies ki tarah urreka-urreka chillaooon Turant khayal aaya ki kyon na aaj issi bhikari ko chai pilaoon Bhikari chai peene ko hua taiyaar mere mann mein upjaa pyar Maine jhatpat chai chadhaaya aur taratar use chaar kavita sunayi Panchvi ki jab baari aayi wo lene laga jor ki jamhai Ye permanent shrota ban sakta hai soch ke mere mann mein phool khila Par hay ri meri kismat uss din se aaj tak wo bhikari mujhe nahi mila Haarna mujhe nahi swikaar phir bhi maine kiya bichaar Apne jaise bechain aatmaon kaa banaya lekh-ak sangh Kuch hi dino mein logon ne badal liya apna apna dhangh Yun to padhe likhe logon ne samaj ko bahut kuch diya hai Par anpad se adheek unhe hi chaalaaki se Samaj ka bhar pur nukssaan bhi kiya hai Theek usi prakar ke chaalaak kavi Apni apni kavita sunakar savhagar se bahar jaane lage Ander baithe mere jaise buddhu kavigan waah waah ko neja nakhoono se Ek dusre ki peeth khujaane lage
Waise bhi aazadi ke baad se ab tak share ke bajaar ke suchkaank ki tarah Shrotayon mein bhari girawat aur waktaaon mein uchaal darz hai Phir berojgaaro ki iss bhid ko shrota bana lene mein kya harz hai Neta se lekar avineta tak sabhi yahi nuskha panate hain Issi bahane berojgaron ko seasonal hi sahi pat rojgaar to mil jaate hain Apni apni haisiyat ke hisaab se bhade mein shrota jugad kar liya jaata hai Ye kaise bebasta ki bebasi hai ki shrota aadmi se saman bana diya jaata hai | |
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just_asim Bronze Member
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| Subject: Re: Main patnivrat pati ke rup amain prasidh hoon Sun Apr 03, 2011 1:47 pm | |
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Rohit Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Main patnivrat pati ke rup amain prasidh hoon Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:49 pm | |
| man prasann ho gaya apki kavita padhkar...
Do line apni kavita ki meri taraf se...
Baraste se saawan me... Soone se aangan me.... Dil bus dhoonta hai... Apne piya ka sath...
Rut bhi badi albeli hai.. Sajni phir bhi akeli hai.. Dil bus dhoodta hai.. Apne piya ka sath.. | |
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